Wanna read the beginning of my story? :D?

That is brilliant!!! I would love to know what story that goes with. Your great at describing everything with that perfect mixture of darkness. Just one recomendation since you don't know who he is or even that he is there at first you should say 'holding A match' instead of 'holding THE match' because you just say 'a flame sparked in the darkness' you don't know its a match so when you say A your kind of like telling them he is there and its a match but in your mysterious awesome way.